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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on May 20, 2007 23:49:22 GMT -5
lol, I love the cliffhangers, but honestly I just can't continue the story when I'm so low on ideas!
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Post by coopfan on May 20, 2007 23:52:10 GMT -5
Sorry to hear that but I am sure you will come up with good ideas by tomorrow or perhaps your helper in this story will move it along. I am not a fan at all of cliffhangers myself.
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on May 21, 2007 0:00:33 GMT -5
lol, Should I update it a bit more?
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Post by coopfan on May 21, 2007 0:04:31 GMT -5
No that is alright Kim as I just stay on the ledge of the cliff with it until tomorrow
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Post by butterscotchgreer on May 21, 2007 9:58:13 GMT -5
kim, if you want to update a little more thats fine with me. i guess im a little low on ideas myself heehee! ill think it over today.
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on May 21, 2007 11:51:08 GMT -5
I'll right, I'll update just a bit more, but I won't make it a complete post.
*She takes a deep breath and gazes into his eyes; searching his eyes for the tiniest bit of hope that he may just take this lightly and forget it ever happened*
Deeds: Sweetheart...
*He chuckles and shakes his head*
Deeds: What is it?
Kim: Darling, I'm...well...I'm from another era.
*Deeds shifts his position and gives her an off-beat look*
Deeds: Huh?
Kim: I'm fr--
Announcer: We will be arriving in Vermont in 10 minutes--
Kim: Darling, I'm from 2007--I found a time machine (well dog'gon it; If this doesn't sound so extremely far-fetched I might as well say Cary Grant's my brother!)
Deeds: Cary who?
*Kim sighs and shakes her head*
Kim: Nothing--I'm from the future and--
Deeds: Is this a joke, Kim? You know how bad I am at your jokes...
Kim: No! Darling, I mean every word of it; I built a time machine (Back to the Future flashback) and I came to find you.
Deeds: Find me? You didn't even know me 2 months ago.
Kim: ...
Deeds: ...Did you?
Kim: Well, I've known you for many years, actually. I built the time machine because of you.
*Deeds gets up and paces, trying to take it all in*
Deeds: Gosh, I bet Theresa doesn't have to go through this with Melody!
*Kim looks down and knits her fingers together, cocking her head to the right and mumbling*
Kim: Well...
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Post by butterscotchgreer on May 21, 2007 12:06:09 GMT -5
kim: ....actually she already told him about it.*she throws herself to the bed*
deeds:youre kidding right......darling?
kim:.....but melody took it well, and they are both happy.
deeds:*sits up on the bed* i have to think about this for a minute.......you.....came here in a time machine that you...yourself built? did i get that right?
kim: well.....yes......it took me quite a few years to do it, but final--
deeds: you say you already new me for years, but how?
kim: i dreamt about you*she sits up next to him and look into his solemn eyes*
deeds:.......
announcer: we have arrived in vermont ladies and gentlemen.
deeds:well we better grab our bags darling.
kim: are you terribly upset at me?
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on May 21, 2007 12:12:21 GMT -5
Deeds: Well, I'm still trying to process it in my mind! How could you have "drempt" of me? We haven't even met!
*They walk out the door with their already packed bags.*
Kim: It's hard to explain, I don't even understand most of it, but please--
*She drops her bags at her side and turns to him, running her hand down his cheek*
Kim: If you love me...you'll forget about it all; My place is here with you! I don't want to go back--I'll never go back without you!
*Deeds knits his brow together and looks down to the ground, removing her hands from his face*
Deeds: I'll have to think on this for a while, Kim; This is a lot to take it all at one time...
*Kim looks down and grabs her bags, following behind him off the ship*
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Post by butterscotchgreer on May 21, 2007 14:50:40 GMT -5
deeds:*walking with his bag in one hand and one hand under his chin mumbling to himself*
kim:*looks at deeds and starts worrying then hails down a taxi*
deeds sees it pull up in front of him, opens the door for kim and slides in after her still mumbling to himself.
kim:*looks away from deeds to gazes at the city rolling by the window. her eyes start to water and a tear rolls down her cheak*
taxi driver looks in the rear view mirror at kim in the back seat and starts to frown.
deeds: *suddenly looks to kim and turns her away from the window forcefully* do you really love me?
kim: yes i do*another tear rolls down her face*
deeds: i thought the whole thing over......and thats all that matters, because i love you too much, and i cant let you go.
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on May 21, 2007 15:06:35 GMT -5
*Kim throws her arms around his neck and kisses him all over*
Kim: Oh sweetheart! Thank you, thank you! I knew you loved me!
*She continues to kiss him; He laughs and holds her close. The taxi driver smiles and sighs*
Driver: Young love...nothin' like it!
***Theresa and Melody***
*The next day Melody and Theresa walk out of the front door with their bags packed. They scan the house and take a deep sigh*
Theresa: Honey, I'm really gonna miss this place.
Melody: So am I...
*He turns to her and places his hands around her waist*
Melody: We'll have a house better than this in Kentucky; you just wait and see. I'm gonna build you the finest house in the state!
*Theresa giggles and runs to the car, waiting for him with Peter in her arms*
Theresa: What are we waiting for?! Let's go!
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Post by butterscotchgreer on May 21, 2007 15:25:23 GMT -5
melody: alright
melody opens the front door and lets theresa get in, then he walks around to the drivers side and gets in himself.
he starts the car and they both smile to each other; peter licks her face.
theresa: oh peter! *she and deeds chuckle*
theresa: darling.....so we are going back to your ranch in vermont to tell your mether the good news.
melody: where else do ya think we're gonna live until i get the house built? i am gonna build you a huge house right next to the one mom is living in.
peter's head hangs out the window in the cool breeze.
theresa: well someone's enjoying himself, as am i*as she places her hand on melody's.
melody turns and smiles to her.
25 minutes later they arrive at the ship.
melody gets the bags and theresa has peter under her arm. they walk onto the boat and theresa wonders...
i wonder if kim had told deeds yet....i hope he took it well if she did. will we run into them? i hope so.*she hangs her head*
melody: whats wrong sweetheart?
theresa: i was just thinking about kim and weather ill get to see her again.
melody: im sure we will.....you dont need to worry.
theresa: i just hope she's happy.
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on May 21, 2007 19:12:22 GMT -5
*Kim and Deeds get back home and Kim walks up to her room. Deeds stops her on the stairs and takes her hand. She looks back and smiles*
Deeds: You know what?
*Kim smiles and shakes her head faintly*
Kim: No, what?
Deeds: I wanna go to 2007 with you--I've been thinking it ove--
Kim: Oh Longfellow, no; I don't want to go back. I want to stay here...
Deeds: Just a quick look around, it wouldn't hurt anything...
Kim: Yes, it would. See, you don't know how lucky you are to be living in the 30's; Life is too different in the future; it's raw, mean and self-destructive! Gentlemen don't exist where I come from...and neither do ladies.
*Deeds chuckles*
Deeds: Then what does exist where you come from? You're from the future and here you stand, a beautiful lady.
*Kim shakes her head, getting frustrated*
Kim: No, you don't understand; I constantly live in a world where men have no respect for women, and women don't hold any respect for themselves. The world is getting darker and darker and I just--
*She collapses in his arms and sobs. He holds her close and runs his fingers through her hair, trying to comfort her as best he can*
Deeds: Shhh, don't cry, Kim; I won't make you go back, I just thoug--
*Kim looks up and wipes a tear from her eyes*
Kim: You don't have to worry about the future, your place is here, with your family and friends.
*Deeds picks Kim up and walks her upstairs*
Deeds: My place is right here with my wife...
*Kim smiles and throws her arms around his neck, whispering to herself*
Kim: I wouldn't rather be anywhere else but here...with you.
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Post by butterscotchgreer on May 21, 2007 21:07:06 GMT -5
beautiful kim. ill post as soon as i can. ;D
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Post by butterscotchgreer on May 22, 2007 0:17:07 GMT -5
theresa and melody arrive in vermont the next day and head toward the ranch.
the taxi pulls up to gardeniabush lane and stops.
melody: well mrs. jones......we're here.
theresa:my new home!
mom:*sees them coming up to the porch and comes running out the door with a dish towel waving in her hand* yooohooo! yall are back. you two must be exhausted
melody: yeah mom....
melody: should i carry you over the threshold again sweetheart?
theresa: you dont have to if you dont want to darling.
melody looks at her and swoops her up into his arms.
mom: YOU GOT MARRIED!
theresa: yes we did.....in africa mrs. jones
mom: i told you to call me mom honey.....were family now. thats the most wonderful piece of news i have heard in many years.
theresa: *blushes* okay...mom
he puts her down gently and they chase each other to the bedroom.
melody gets there first and hides behind the door. theresa comes in after and look around the room for him.
theresa: melody....i know youre in he.....AAAAAAH!* he pops out from behind the door and grabs her from behind.
theresa and melody kiss passionately.
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on May 22, 2007 1:22:13 GMT -5
Pally, I really don't know where to take this. I thought if I didn't have any plans that it wouldn't tie me up at the end and stand in my way, but my plan's backfired! My plan book is all empty on this one! I'm just completely lost
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on May 22, 2007 10:28:32 GMT -5
*Later that afternoon, Kim and Deeds sit under a shaded tree in the plains of Kentucky. The wild, crisp country wind blows up against them and gives the atmosphere a warm feel to it. Deeds chews on a piece of straw as Kim lays in his arms and plays with the buttons on his shirt. Kim looks up to him*
Kim: Darling...
*He looks down and smiles*
Deeds: Yeah?
Kim: I miss Theresa...
Deeds: Well ya' just saw her a couple weeks ago...
*Kim looks down and pulls at a couple strands of grass*
Kim: I know, but she's my best friend and I--
Deeds: You have to give her some space; She an Melody just got married two weeks ago, give them some time to get their bearrings...
Kim: *Nods* All right, but can we visit them next weekend, at least? I really wanna show her what I got down at that beauty parlor. Oh she'll just love that new hat...
*Deeds chuckles and gently caresses her shoulder*
Deeds: Sure, sweetheart, we'll see her next weekend...
*Kim smiles and kisses him sweetly*
Kim: Oh thank you, darling!
*He smirks and pulls her close*
Deeds: ...Not at all...
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Post by butterscotchgreer on May 22, 2007 12:25:29 GMT -5
theresa: you scared me ya big hunk*she smiles but before she can say anything else, he kisses her.
melody:ya know that time machine you came here in?
theresa: yeah why?
melody: can i see what it looks like?
theresa:um.....
melody: i have never seen one before and am kinda curious.
theresa: well....its not exactly here, its in california.
theresa:where my hero rescued me on the train..*she glances up at him and smiles*
melody:aawwww sweetheart!
melody: its at the train station?*he looks down at her*
theresa: not exactly
melody: then where did you come from?
theresa: a closet in a drug store
melody:*he chuckles slightly*
theresa: are you laughing at me?
melody: *he suddenly stops and clears his throat* no....no where did you get that idea?
theresa: ya know i bet your ticklish just as much as i am darling. *she tries tickling him everywhere and he just stands there*
melody:*all the sudden, he picks her up, throws her on the bed and starts to tickle her.*
theresa: okay....my tall dark and handsome man is not ticklish*she tries to stop laughing.*
melody:now.....about the time machine...
theresa:alright darling, but...
melody: but what?
theresa: i want to stay here just for at least one week and get to know your mother first. she can teach me a lot on how to handle you.
melody:your so funny.
theresa:*she looks at him and giggles to herself*
melody: okay you win. but we leave next weekend.
theresa goes into the bathroom and puts a comfortable lavish robe on. then she heads down stairs to help mom with dinner.
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on May 22, 2007 13:43:38 GMT -5
*Next weekend rolls around and Kim leaps down the stairs with her bags in hand*
Kim: Longfellow, come on! We don't want to be late!
*She giggles as he bounds down the stairs after her. Kim dashes out the door and into the car. Deeds runs into the living room to chase after her when he almost knocks into mom*
Deeds: Oh, excuse me mom, I'm--
Mom: You better settle down, you; Be more of a gentleman, you're no little boy anymore.
*Deeds laughs and picks her up, giving her a huge hug and a goodbye kiss. He sets her down and stops at the door, looking back to her. She laughs and swats at him*
Mom: Oh, get on you little hooligan!
*He laughs and waves*
Deeds: Bye mom! ...Bye!
*She stands at the front porch waving to them both. They peel out of the driveway and head on down the road to their destination. Kim throws her head back as the wind whirls her hair around crazily*
Kim: Oh darling, I can't wait to see Theresa and Melody again! Thank you so much for doing this...
*Deeds looks to her and smiles, placing his arm around the seat of her chair.*
Deeds: I don't mind...the more time I get to spend with my girl the better...
Kim: Oooo, you're such a sweetie, darling...
*She giggles as he smiles proudly*
Deeds: Yeah, well, I'm not a young boy anymore, you know...Mom says I gotta be a gentleman to the ladies.
Kim: Not all that ladies, I hope.
*He chuckles and looks to her*
Deeds: Nope, just my wife...
*She leans against him and kisses his cheek softly*
Kim: You've always been a gentleman....but sometimes I like that little boy in you.
*He exhales deeply and looks to her*
Deeds: Yeah?
*She laughs and nods, looking back to the road*
Kim: Yup.
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