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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Oct 24, 2006 1:49:54 GMT -5
*Kim keeps her eyes fixed on Deeds*
Deeds: What is it, darling?
Kim: You know I didn't want you to hurt that man...
Deeds: *Holds Kim close* I kept telling him to move aside, that I didn't want to hurt him but he kept getting in my way. Darling, you know I didn't do it to disobey ya', I wanted to get back to you as quickly as I could...
*Kim folds her arms and looks straight ahead*
Deeds: Awww, Kim, please don't be angry with me.
*She continues to ignore him*
*He looks to Sel and Jerry and shrugs*
*They look at Kim, then back to Deeds and shrug as well*
*He taps the driver on the shoulder*
Deeds: Just let me off here, please...
*Kim looks to Deeds, worried*
*He looks to her, as if to say 'Just say the words and I'll stay...'*
*But she turns her head quickly and continues to ignore him*
*He sighs and walks out*
*Sel and Jerry look angily at Kim*
Kim: What? You heard me tell him I didn't want him to fight anymore!
*Jerry and Sel fold THEIR arms and ignore her*
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Oct 24, 2006 19:41:18 GMT -5
sel: you know what? stop the cab! kim: what are you doing?? sel: kim, you know what your doing? your throwing love away with both hands! you get out of this cab right now! and yuo go after him! kim: wha- sel: now! *opens door* sel: get out! go after him! and get married! kim: but- * before kim could object sel throws her out the door!* sel: call me when your done! ok? bye! *smiles and drives off* kim: wait!! no!! darnit! *turrns around and finds herself alone, and scared.* kim: *says to self* deeds where are you? *kim begins to walk across the street to go in the bar and think about her troubles* Kim: *at the bar* umm, I'll have a... I'll have a, acoke. * the man gives her her "drink" and kim walks away with her drink in hand, but accidently bumps into a man and spills the whole thing on her new dress!* kim: oh no!! man: oh Im soooo sorry! *kim looks up and see's that it was deeds, her eyes imediatly water up!* kim: oh deeds! im so sorry, im so sorry for everything! *kim reaches up and gives him a long kiss* deeds: no darling, it was my fault! kim: no it wasnt! i know who you were dealing with and I should have understood! lets get outta here! deeds; ok! kim: oh wait! I have to call sel, she told me to call her when I was "done" *laughs and dials up sel* kim: hello? sel: kim? kim: hey well you were right, and we're "done " now *laughs* sel: hey come down to the hotel! i have a great surprise! kim: what is it? sel: just come down! jer: *jumps on the phone!* yeah! you heard her! come on! hurry up!! kim: ok.. * deeds and kim jump the next cab and head down to the hotel!*
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Oct 24, 2006 19:52:06 GMT -5
*Kim and Deeds kiss and giggle in the back seat on the way over to the hotel*
*He gazes lovingly into her eyes*
Deeds: Oh!
*He turns to the driver*
Deeds: I have to get out, here.
*He looks to Kim*
Deeds: I have a surprise for you...
*Kim looks to him, puzzled*
Kim: At this time of night? *She chuckles to herself and gives him another kiss*
Deeds: Yeah! There's something I wanted to do for you...would you mind if I do it now?
Kim: Oh, not at all...but will you be back in time to celebrate at the hotel?
*He gives her an assuring kiss and smiles*
Deeds: Yes, darling. It won't take any time at all.
*She smiles sweetly*
Kim: All right, we'll be waiting...
*He opens the door and jumps out, blowing her a kiss*
*She rides off down the street and watches him from the back window*
*The two keep their gaze held on each other and Kim turns straight-forward*
Kim: I wonder what he could be up to...
Driver: Well, ma'am...I ain't no professional on these sorts a' things, but I rekkon he's be cheatin' on you.
Kim: *Laughs* No, I know he's faithful
Driver: Well ma'am, I've seen these things before...and that's how these feller's are.
*Kim laughs again and shakes her head*
Kim: No, sir, I appreciate your concern, but I know he's not seeing other women.
*There's silence and Kim chuckles to herself*
Yeah....I know he's not seeing other women.....right?
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Oct 24, 2006 20:14:54 GMT -5
* kim finaly arrives at the hotel* kim: *goes to her room and sel and jerry burst through the door with champane in there hands* wahts going on? sel: guess what? kim: what?? sel: WE'RE GETTING MARRIED TONIGHT!!!!! kim: what?! oh congradulations!! *gives sel and jer a big hug* sel: yeah well me and jerry just couldnt wait any longer!*sel gives jer a kiss* sel: oh but honey, thats not all.. kim: what do you mean? * just then deeds comes through the door and a bellboy follows * *sel and jerry just stare at kim and smile* kim: whats going on? deeds: well honey, * reaches for the cart the bellboy brought up and pushes it in front of him* I wanted to share something with you.. kim: what?!> * reaches for the plater lid and lifts it up only to find a big diamond ring on the tray! * kim: gasps! deeds: i wanted to share the rest of my life with you.... what do you say? you want to get married tonight too? kim: * just realizing that she had nothing to worry about with deeds, he loved her and he would never cheat, he must have gone to get the ring! but her thoughts caught up to her, why was she always worried about deeds?* deeds: well?....... kim: uh......
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Oct 24, 2006 20:18:30 GMT -5
*Kim looks to Deeds and then back at the ring*
Kim: Darling, this must have cost a fortune!!
*He looks at her and smiles proudly, taking her up in his arms and holding her tight*
Deeds: I love you, sweetheart, and that's all I care about...
*Kim looks to the ring and then back to Deeds*
Kim: No...
*His eyes bulge and he loosens his grasp*
Deeds: What?
Sel, Jerry: WHAT?!?!
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Oct 24, 2006 20:45:40 GMT -5
WHAT? !!!!!!! kim: I cant. deeds: wha- why- what did I do? kim: oh deeds its not you! its me *begins to sob!* I cant marry you because, Im afraid... deeds: *goes to kim and holds her* oh darling you dont have to be afraid! not with me! kim: thats not what i mean! im afraid of me not trusting you! deeds: why? i would never hurt you! never! *grabs kims face so that she is looking into his eyes* never. kim: *pushes his hand off her face* I know! *sobs* I know!! but... what if I hurt you? i could never live with myself if I hurt you! deeds: * smirks* Im willing to risk it. kim: oh deeds, *falls into his arms* you are too good for me! deeds: please kim, please fall back in love with me and do me the honor of marring me.. kim: *looks him in the eyes, and thinks, i do love him! i do I do* I DO! deeds: really? oh my darling darling! kim: *kisses him all over his face and spreading her tears all over each others faces!* yes i do! sel: well lets have a toast to true love! jer: and marrige! sel and jerry together: and the future! *both couples beging to kiss*
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Oct 24, 2006 20:57:25 GMT -5
Lol....ooooo, crap! This is so not how I thought you were gonna play it! LOL
*Kim looks to Deeds and starts to cry again*
Deeds: Oh, darling, what is it? Are you unhappy with me or something?
Kim: No...no it isn't that.
*She turns her face, unable to look him in the eyes*
Deeds: *He guides her face to his* Please tell me...how will I make it better if I don't know what it is that's bothering you?
Kim: I--...I can't take the ring.
Deeds: Is that what's bothering you?
*She nods*
*He takes her in his arms, hugging her tightly*
Deeds: Isn't it nice enough for you? I know you like pretty things, so I tried the best I could!
*She smiles weakly*
Kim: Of course it's good enough for me, but I don't need a big ring like that!
*She throws her arms around him*
Kim: All I need is you, not a big fancy ring!
*They all take a big sigh of relief*
Deeds: Oh sweetheart!
*He picks her up and spins her around the room*
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Oct 24, 2006 21:07:14 GMT -5
lol! sorry! lol! is THAT what you wanted to happen or did you want to break up with him sel: oh why complaine girly? *laughs* take what you can! kim: * laughs* deeds: so what do you want me to do with it? sel: put it on her! kim: oh no! i dont want- sel: kim! it's his money! he wants to give you a rock, you take it!!! kim: well....ok! *deeds slips the rock on her finger!* *sel and jerry yell out* WOOO WHOOO!! pop the champane open and begin to celebrate!
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Oct 24, 2006 21:14:07 GMT -5
No, I wanted to tell him no, have him freak and then tell him I just wanted a cute little ring.
*The two dance around the room with the record player singing*
*They sway around for a while, cheek to cheek but Deeds doesn't have the same care-free waltz as he usually does*
*Kim notices something's wrong and she looks up at him*
*He has a worried look on his face...*
Kim: What's wrong, sweetheart? Everything's all right *She chuckles sweetly* I'll keep the ring, I only said no because I didn't want you to spend all that money!
*She kisses him softly and smiles sweetly but he gives her a weak smile*
Deeds: I--I'll be right back...
*He races out the door and leaves Kim, stunned, just standing in the same dancing position as he left her*
*She looks to Jerry and Sel then shrugs*
*They laugh and shrug back*
*She looks to the door and sighs*
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Oct 25, 2006 2:07:26 GMT -5
kim?!? what are you doing?!? your ruining your love for Deeds!!!! lol! well i dont know whats going to happen next! lol! so im going to write a little but i want to see where your going with this! lol! sel: so what do you think that was about? *jerry shrugs* kim: i dont know.....but im going to find out! *kim walks out the door after deeds!* sorry if you wanted kim to stay, i just didnt know what to do! lol! i mean, you've broken up with deeds already like 3 times and I put you guys back together!! lol!! theres only so many matchmakers! !!!
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Oct 25, 2006 15:29:00 GMT -5
lol, I know! I'm trying to put a little drama into the movie. Ya' know how they usually have a climax in the middle? Well, I'm just trying to make it more "shocking!" lol, but seriously, I feel really bad 'cause it seems like it's all about Deeds and me. Geez, you should start making Jerry and you a storyline, don't feel as though it's my story, lol, it's both of ours!! *Kim chases after Deeds, but realizes it's too late, as he's already peeled out of the parking lot and leapt into a taxi* *She sighs and walks to the bar* Kim: Just a coke, please. *The bartender hands her the coke* Bartender: You alright, miss? You're looking a little depressed... Kim: *Runs her fingers across the sweat of the coke and sighs* Oh, just confused, that's all. Bartender: Well, I wish ya' the best of luck... Kim: *Smiles weakly* Thanks. *Meanwhile, 3 hours later, Kim is in the hotel room, freaking out and pacing the floor* Kim: Where could he be?! *She pulls Jerry by the collar and gets an inch from his face* Kim: Where could he be?!?!?! Jerry: *In his CCH voice* I don't know, I don't know! Get off me, will ya'! *He swats at her and she sits down hard, sighing* Sel: Awww, don't worry about him, Kim. If we've learned anything about this man it's that he can hold his own...nothing stands in his way, especially when he knows you're waiting for him. He'd scale the mountains for ya', sweety! He'll be back. *Kim looks to Sel and falls into her arms* Kim: Oh Sel, what if he doesn't make it back?! What if something terrible happend?! *Kim starts to wail and Sel looks to Jerry, unsure of what to say*
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Oct 25, 2006 19:47:43 GMT -5
lol! thats ok kim, me and jerry like the breaks! lol! im just kidding! sel: oh kim, dont fret! kim: *sobs* and now I ruined the mood for you and jerry's wedding! *sobs* sel: oh its ok! after all tomorow is another day ( i swear i heard that before! lol) kim: no! *sobs* I want you to do what you wanted! get married tonight! sel: uh.. but we kinda wanted to do it with you guys! you know, a two for one type thing! *laughs weakly* kim: so I ruined that too?! *wails* sel: oh kim! *looks to jerry for some help* jerry: uh, kim! we should go out to, you know to take your mind off things.. kim: what? i cant go out now! look at me *her face coverd in mascara filled tears!* jer: eww kim: what??? jerry : i mean what are ya talkin about!! you look great! c'mon *wipes kims cheeks off with his hankey* c'mon doll, lets go kim: but i dont want to go! sel: JUST GET UP AND GO!!!!!!!! kim: *in little girl voice* ok. *sel and jerry take her to a wild club they passed on the way to the hotel* kim: i want to go back, what if deeds comes back for me?? sel: then he's just gonna have to wait kim! now c'mon lets dance! kim: but I dont have anyone to dance with me! sel: i tell what, I'll let you borrow my jerry for a couple of dances ok? but remember, NO return policies! *all start to laugh* * jer takes kim to the middle of the dance floor while sel sits and watches from a table* kim: this sure was nice of you jerry, you know to take a poor gal out and stuff... jer: aww, it was nothin.... *after a few fast dances and a few more drinks for kim a slow dance comes up* kim: boy jerry, you sure are a good dancer... no wonder sel loves you so much! *jer looks to sel for help* kim: you know, deeds cant even dances like you! your so swave jerry, WOW! your eyes are so puurrrrdy! *jerry is now holding kim up and swaying back and forth, just then sel pops up* sel: wow, honey looks like you had a good time jer: *whispers to sel* what took you so long?? she drunk and hitting on me!!! *sel and jer are dragging her out the door on their shoulders* kim: hey! hey ! hey what are ya whispering for? sel: nothin honey c'mon lets go back to the hotel... *whispers to jer* oh maybe she was just swept off her feet by your dance moves! * smiles * kim: ok! *smiles, then begins to sob!* the hotel?? what if deeds is waiting!! *wails * DEEDS! DEEDS! sel: ok honey, get into the cab nice and easy! *sel and jer throw her in! *
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Oct 25, 2006 19:53:49 GMT -5
*Kim pants out the window and makes shreiking sounds at every car that passes*
*Sel reaches for Kim*
Sel: Kim...Kim...KIM! You're fogging up the window, stop that. People may think you're insane
Kim: *Laughing manically* Well...what if I am?! Who's business is it?!
*She gets an angry look on her face....then turns back to normal*
Kim: Hehehehehe, I'm just KIDDING!
*She throws her feet over the seat and starts kicking, the driver starts to swerve*
*Kim gets one inch from Jerry's face*
Kim: Hey....
*Jerry looks to Sel for help*
Kim: *She pokes him* Did you eat my fiance'?
*Jerry's eye bulge and he shoots a glance over to Sel*
Jerry: ...Help?
*Sel reaches for Kim again and tries pulling her upright*
Sel: Kim, you've really gotta settle down.
*Kim swats at her nose and spins herself around, nearly falling over*
Kim: Hey...Isch caaahn get dshrunk if I wants schto! Dunt matter!
*She folds her arms and loses her balance, hitting her head on the front seat*
Sel: Driver, please take us to the Plaza hotel...and step on it!
*Kim passes out in the backseat and Jerry starts laughing hysterically*
Jerry: This broad is dead! *Sigh* FINALLY!
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Oct 25, 2006 20:32:09 GMT -5
lol! have fun kim??? * so then the cab finaaly arrives and sel and jer are carrying her up stairs! jerry has her head and sel has her legs!* jer: i cant beleive she did that! *laughs, and almost drops her head!* sel: hey! watchout!! you almost droped her. well i can beleive it! * jerry grabs a lugage ( i dont think i spelled that right! lol) cart* jer: c'mon put her on this! sel: what? im not putting her on that! she not a suitecase, jerry!! jer: well im not carrying her all the way upstairs! sel: well how are going to bring her up in a cart? *ding* jerry: the elevator! sel: ok! *her and jerry put kim on the cart* *upstairs, everyone on the halls looked at kim as if she was dead and sel and jer had her body!* sel: oh, she's alright, just had a little too much to drink *sell tells everyone she passes while jerry smiles chessily to everyone* c'mon, jerry lets wheel her to her room! *finaly they arrive at her door and right before they put the key in the door, it opens!* sel: Deeds?!? what happened to you???
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Oct 25, 2006 20:41:07 GMT -5
'Deeds': Oh, you must be mistaken, my name's Henry.
Sel: Oh, I'm very sorry.
*They continue to carry Kim down the hall and Jerry struggles to opens the door, resting her head on his knee and unlocking the door*
Sel: Hurry up, Jerry! People are staring!
Jerry: I'm trying! I'm trying! Stop rushing me!!
*He wiggles the door knob and it opens up*
*They both carry her to the bed and lay her down*
Jerry: *Deep sigh* Finally! Geez, she must weigh 1,000 pounds!
Sel: Jerry.....
Jerry: Yeah?
Sel: Shut up.
Jerry: Yes, dear.
*Sel opens the covers and slides Kim in*
*They close the door and leave her be*
Jerry: So...we're all alone, now.
*Sel winks*
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Oct 25, 2006 21:06:10 GMT -5
lol! what happened to deeds??!! sel: well in too tired to do anything! jer: yeah i suppose you are, you know pushing this beast and all sel: JERRY!! jer: oh, sorry *smiles* so your too tired huh? * runs over to sel and picks her up and carries her to their room!* sel: aaahhhh! put me down!!! jer: *laughs* mwahahaha! your mine!!! *they both laugh uncontrolably* *jerry throws sel down on the bed and jumps on the bed right next to her* sel: so mr. Kong sir, ( you know like King Kong) what do you want from me? jer: * starts acting like a monkey!* ooh ooh ahh ahh! me want jane! sel *laughs* thats tarzan silly! *reaches over to jerry and begins to kiss him* sel: oh wait wait... i feel so sweaty and dirty after pushing her and dragging her out of that club you know, so im going to take a shower and then we can get back to what we were doing! ok? jerr: aww man, ok. *sel goes in to take shower and leaves jerry alone to watch tv, when all of a sudden a knock comes on the door!* jer: wha- who could that be? ......
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Oct 25, 2006 21:18:59 GMT -5
BEAST?! LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!! *Jerry jumps up and runs to the door* Bellboy: Hello, sir, this message came for a Miss York Jerry: Oh, yeah, that's for Kim, I'll take it. *The bellboy nods and waits, holding his hand out* *Jerry looks the guy up and down and then shakes his hand, slamming the door in his face* *He begins to open the letter but Sel walks out with a towel* Sel: Jerry? Who was that? Jerry: *Jumps and hides the letter* No one, dear...just the bellboy *Sel walks up to Jerry and grabs the note from him* Sel: What's this? Jerry: Oh...something for Ki--I wasn't gonna read it!! *Sel laughs and looks around* Sel: Should we? Jerry: Yeah! *Sel opens it, and it reads* My darling=
Can't break to you through mail. Montana's train station. 4pm. Tomorrow.
=Yours*Sel and Jerry look to each other and gasp* Both: He's leaving her for Montana?! Sel: Wait, wait...why would he send her a note like this? Jerry: I dunno, but I never liked him in the first place *Jerry puts his fists up and pretends like he's fighting Deeds* Sel: Jerry...I think he's planning on leaving her. Jerry: Nah, he can't be...you've seen those two! They're like wild buffalo's during mating season. Sel: No, Jerry...listen: Can't break to you through mailSel: He's leaving her, Jerry... *Kim walks out of the bedroom, rubbing her eyes* Kim: What happend? *Sel throws the letter to Jerry and Jerry throws it in the fire* Sel: You got a little drunk last night, kiddo... Kim: *Getting a worried look on her face, remembering Deeds is missing* Where's Deeds? *Sel looks to Jerry and Jerry to Sel* Both: ...Well...
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Oct 25, 2006 21:47:50 GMT -5
oooh! drama!! lol! oh yeah...sorry about that whole beast thing! lol! but i never said you wighed 1,000 pounds!!! lol! i could have meant you were a little cute small ittle-wittle beast!! lol! anyways..... sel: well, umm... hey arent you hungry? you should start everyday out with a healthy breakfast!! jerry! get some- jerry: already on it! *dialing on the phone for room service!* kim: whats going on? *gives sel the skinty eyed look* your hidding something! arent you sel??!! sel: wha- what are you talking about?? kim, your...your.. umm *jerry jumps in* jerry: your still dreaming! sel: *swats him and shakes her head* thanks jerry! (sarcasm) kim: whats are you hidding sel?? is it about deeds? has something happened to him?? oh no! he's dead isnt he?? he's dead!!! *kim faints* *kims laying on the floor* sel: well maybe she's still drunk! jerry: *nods in agreement* so what do we tell her when she wakes up? sel: the truth!! jer: we cant tell her the truth! sel: why not!? jer: cause then she's gonna know we read her letter! sel: oh yeah... well umm, well im gonna get dressed then we'll figure something out! *sel goes to get dressed and jerry just stands their looking at kim on the floor!* jer: kim? *whispers* kim? hey, you there? sel: *yells from bathroom* LEAVE HER ALONE JERRY!
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