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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Jul 12, 2007 17:15:33 GMT -5
Stella ( images.allposters.com/images/54/039_62445.jpg ) and Norma ( img366.imageshack.us/img366/6746/gingerbl3.jpg ) are two small town girls who make it to the big city by winning a ticket to New York City to be the first in NY to watch the Martin and Lewis Show live! Both girls are quite nervous; having come from LittleStone, Kentucky and never once leaving their state in either of their lives, they figure it's a once in a lifetime oppotunity and board the train with all their belongings. This is their story.
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Post by misspurdy on Jul 12, 2007 17:26:15 GMT -5
The girls are walking on a sidewalk, Norma is reading the map. Both look pretty lost, looking around like little kids. They are looking the great big theatre where Martin and Lewis are playing. They are dressed at their best dresses and look stunning, but they are getting little desperate.
Norma: Why couldn't we just take a cab? Stella: Oh, quit whining, I already said it. Because you made me find that hotel, you'll find us the theatre. That's only fair. Norma: No it isn't. This is much harder! Everything is so big and... Stella: And scary. You already said that when I sugested that you'll find the hotel. Norma: You are cruel! Stella: And I will get more cruel if I don't see the show. Let's look at that map, shall we?
It's a little short but Im not the best sotrybeginner. And sorry my english, hope you understood.
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Jul 12, 2007 17:38:37 GMT -5
LOL, I love it! I'll update once I get back; hold that thought!
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Jul 13, 2007 16:17:33 GMT -5
*Norma pulls out the map and takes a deep sigh*
Norma: *Hesitates* ...Okay, what are we looking for?
Stella: The Glass Hat, you nincompoop! Sheesh!
Norma: Well I'm sorry! Don't need to be so cruel!
*Norma continues looking at the map and wanders around in a circle, then stops and points West*
Norma: That way!
Stella: Do I dare ask what you were doing?
Norma: Nope.
Stella: All right, then let's go!
*The girls head west for about 10 minutes and come to the club.*
Norma: Woohooo! We made it!
Stella: It's about time! Now let's hurry up before we get backrow seats!
*The girls scurry in and find the place almost empty. Stella looks at her clock*
Stella: We're right on time why is it so empty!?
*Norma looks to the clock in the theater and gasps*
Norma: We're two hours early! You're watch is fast!
Stella: Well...at least we have the best seats in the house.
*Stella chuckles faintly as the two girls walk up to the front and take the table nearest to the stage*
Norma: What are we going to do for 2 hours?
Stella: Well, I don't--
*Martin and Lewis walk out discussing their scenes when they see Norma and Stella sitting in front of them. Dean smiles charmingly as Jerry throws his hands over his head, makes a few strange noises and leaps into Stella's arms*
Dean: Well hiya honey...
*Norma smiles shyly*
Norma: Hello...
Jerry: Look at this one, Dean! She's a masterpeice!
Dean: Why don't you hang her up on your wall, Jer, and frame her?
*Jerry smiles like a kid and hesitates, gazing into her eyes*
Jerry: Maybe I will!
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Post by misspurdy on Jul 13, 2007 16:21:40 GMT -5
What a lovely update!<3 Okay, I'll try now...
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Post by misspurdy on Jul 13, 2007 16:40:25 GMT -5
Both of girls are stunned, no, they're hysterical, no, they're IN THEIR SEVENTH HEAVEN!! Stella giggles and looks Jerry under her eyelashes and tries not to drop him on the floor. Norma looks Dean at shy smile on her face and Dean smiles back charmingly. Both girls are now very happy that they were so early and think that the trip here was the best thing thats ever happenend to them. If they wouldn't be so nervous, they would scream: YA-HOOO!!
Stella: That wouldn't be so horrible. Norma leans over and whispers to her: Remind me that I'll turn my watch faster too. Stella smiles her victory-is-mine-smile and whispers: I will.
Dean sits next to Norma and Jerry is still on Stellas lap and isn't moving anywhere. Neither of them don't complain about it. They chat for a couple of minutes and make the girls laugh many times. Dean looks both of girls with a charming grin. Dean: How did you find your way here so early, cuties? Norma: It all started on our way to hotel.... *Stella punches Norma at her elbow." Stella: *whispers* Shut up! Then she smiles as charminly as she can and says: We wanted the best seats. *Dean and Jerry smile at each other.* Dean: You got them, didn't ya? Both girls nod.
Then boys must go reheasal their dancenumer, but ask the girls to come with them. Stella and Norma look at each other for a second and then nodd even harder. They look like a couple of dolls which heads are going to fall. They ask the guys wait and go to the ladiesroom to powder their noses and add more lipstick. Stella looks little worried, but Norma is too busy at messing her hair more gurly. Stella: Are you sure this is a good idea? Norma turns to her and grins. Norma: If it isn't, so what? Stella thinks couple of seconds and then grins back. Stella: Actually, I've always loved bad ideas. Norma: Me too, let's go.
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Jul 14, 2007 16:54:06 GMT -5
I didn't know where you wanted me to take it so I'm going to wing it, if you don't like it please let me know!
*The girls walk out of the powder room dressed to kill and they wink at each other and knock on the dressing rooms of their chosen men. Jerry opens his door and smiles sweetly at Stella, gazing into her eyes*
Stella: Hello, Jerry.
Jerry: Hello...Stella.
*He says nervously.*
Stella: May I come in?
*He opens the door and guides her to the sofa. He sits next to her nervously and smiles, unsure of what to say*
*Dean opens his door to find Norma leaning against the doorframe. He looks her up and down and smiles*
Dean: Hiya baby....
*Norma smiles and nods*
Dean: Come on in.
*Dean walks to the bar as Norma continues standing near the doorframe looking stylish. Once he turns his back she quickly tries to unhook herself from one of the long splinters in the door that's caught on her dress; trying not to rip it she pulls gently but as time is growing thin she yanks the whole thing and hears a rip. Her eyes grow wide and she quickly scurries in to sit down on his chair*
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Post by misspurdy on Jul 14, 2007 16:58:11 GMT -5
Oh I'm sorry if I took it to wrong way, I didn't know what should I write next. We can go back if you like.
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Jul 14, 2007 16:59:25 GMT -5
Would you like me to change Jerry's character?
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Post by misspurdy on Jul 14, 2007 17:00:41 GMT -5
If you like, we can take back to the part I wrote last time. I can chance it if you like!
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Jul 14, 2007 17:03:52 GMT -5
All right, I changed it up a bit; does that work better?
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Post by misspurdy on Jul 14, 2007 17:05:46 GMT -5
Ok, I'll try now. Sorry if I did something wrong, didn't mean to make this hard.
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Jul 14, 2007 17:12:23 GMT -5
What did you think you did wrong? I usually have no idea where to take my story, lol, it's nothing you've done wrong!
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Post by misspurdy on Jul 14, 2007 17:28:27 GMT -5
In Jerry's dressingroom Stella sits on a sofa, twisting her ankles and tries to think something smart to say. What New Yorkers say in a things like this? Stella: Well...it's a nice dressingroom you have here. *That was classy.* Jerry: Yeah, it's pretty good compared to money they give. Stella: Uhm...yeah...*Feels now like a total moron.* What is going on with Norma?
Well, a LITTLE better than Stella. Dean is mixing drinks and Norma is sitting on a chair, desperately trying to fix her dress and look classy at the same time. Dean sits chair next to Norma and gives her drink. She tries to lean back as much as she can and prays at the same time that she don't make a total idiot of herself. Dean looks Norma charmingly and looks at her eyes. Norma tries to pull the dress together at the same time and smiles nervously. Dean: It's such a honor to have such beautiful audience like you. Makes work more standable. Norma giggles nervously and leans back little more. Unfortunately Dean thinks thats shyness and gets more interested. Dean: Why don't you relax a little, get cozy, baby...Im not gonna hurt you...at least not much. *Norma smiles more nervously and curses her dress right to a very bad place.* Dean: Are you afraid of me? *GOD NO!* Norma: No, it's just... Suddenly Norma hears another rip, louder than last time. She pulls a pillow behind her, jumps up like a cat and runs to hallway. She screams like a firealarm when she passes Jerrys dressingroom. Norma: STEEEEEEEEEELLLLLAAAA!! *Stella tooks a big breath of relief and gives a great big smile to Jerry.* Stella: Gotta go now, girlstalk! See ya at the show, good luck! *She runs after Norma, who runs back to the ladiesroom with a pillow over the rip on her dress.*
Is this better?
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Jul 14, 2007 18:02:56 GMT -5
Better? There was nothing wrong with your previous post! I love them all Stella: What's up? *Norma turns around to show Stella the huge rip* Stella: I knew Dean was a wild man, but he's gone too far this time! Norma: No, no, I ripped it on the doorframe! Help me! Stella: How can I help you? I've got no needle and thread on me right now. Norma: Can't you... *She looks around to find a pair of pants laying in a paper bag from Dayton's. She looks next to the stall to find a woman dressing and smirks, getting an idea.* Stella: *Whispers* Don't you dare...those aren't yours. Norma: Oh, don't be so stuffy, she'll never know! Besides, it's just one pair of pants! Stella: I wouldn't do it! *Norma quickly takes the pants and runs into the nearest stall and gets dressed quickly. Once finished she takes Stella by the arm and the two quickly skat.*
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Post by misspurdy on Jul 14, 2007 18:24:16 GMT -5
The girls are walking down the hallway, hoping that anybody hasn't stole their seats. Girls marked the spot with thread of death, but some people can't read threads in a right way and steal the seats anyway. Norma doesn't look worried at all. Actually she looks really happy with her "new" pants and Stella looks little worried. She is still afraid that the pants-owner will notice. She doesn't want to end their trip at NY-policestation. Stella: She will notice that, I know it. Norma looks at her with big smile and says: Don't be such a worrier! What even could happen? I can always say that it was your idea. Stella: Gee, thanks pally. You're such a sweetheart! Norma: I know. Besides, I made a trade with her. Stella: A trade? What kind of trade? If that was our keys to the hotelroom, I swear Im gonna.. Norma: Pww! No! Actually it could've been a good trade...The boys could easily room us somewhere.. *She looks back to the ladiesroom door with a devilish grin.* Stella: Don't even think about it! Or actually...NO! What did you trade? Norma: I put my ripped dress to her bag. Stella: You did WHAT? Norma: What, wasn't that a good one? Stella: Didn't you think that she'll PROBABLY notice if her pants are transformed to a dress which has ripped at back? Norma: She won't notice anything. I'll trade the pants after the show or if I still like them after the show, she can keep the dress. Hope she can handle the needles. *Stella takes another deep breath and reminds herself that Norma is her best friend.* Stella: Nevermind. Lets go to the seats, the show starts soon. Oh, good;) Im not just so self-assured at my first "adventure," but it's good if Im made good this far. Love your parts too!
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Jul 19, 2007 14:46:18 GMT -5
*The girls sit at their reserved table up front and sit nervously, awaiting the show to start. The lights dim and the boys walk up onstage doing their schpeil when Dean glances at Norma from time to time and gives her a charming smile. Jerry looks to Stella and flubs up a couple lines because of his cute distraction. The girls look to each other and smile blissfully, then continue to watch the show in awe. About 30 minutes later the boys call the two girls up onstage, completely ad-libbed and un-rehearsed.*
Stella: Oh, I couldn't possi--
Jerry: Awww, come on, they'd love to see your beautiful face...
Stella: *Blushes and giggles, while taking her hand in Jerry's* All right...
*Dean helps Norma upstage and the two girls stand by their boys, nervous in front of the bright spotlight*
Dean: Why don't you tell the folks your name, darling...
*Norma stands up to the mic, squinting from the bright light*
Norma: My name is Norma, and this is my best friend Stella...
*Jerry and Dean begin to crack jokes. The girls stand off to the side and share a couple words*
Stella: We're bombing!
Norma: No kidding...
Stella: What are we gonna do?
Norma: We've seen these guys before...we know their kind of humor; let's show them up!
Stella: You think it'll work?
Norma: I know it will work. Everyone says we're like the Martin and Lewis in female version...this'll be a cinch.
Stella: All right, let's hope it'll work!
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Post by misspurdy on Jul 19, 2007 15:21:21 GMT -5
The smile each other with new self-assureness. Stella smiles and whispers: The usual? Norma nodds and smiles back: Why not.
They walk straight to the boys, and look them with devilish grin. Stella starts talking little more shyly than usual, mumbling a little and speaking more funnier voice at times. Stella: Norma, we were introduced but they forgot themselves, how embarassing. Well, I can help with that. Norma, here is my good friend Jerry. Norma, who isnt as shy as Stella because of simple agreement together, walks straight to Jerry and puts her arms around him. Stella looks at them "stunned." Dean tries not to laugh, because he knows the joke, Jerry looks a little horrifyed, mouth opened and eyes looking like pair of golfballs. Norma looks at him flirting, lashing her eyelashes and giggling. She hugs Jerry really tight and really close. Stella starts to walk around them. The audience is laughing and clapping.
Stella: Hope you too get along. He's my friend, Norma....Norma, he's my FRIEND! Norma doesnt notice anything. Stella walks around them, tries to stop them, getting more desperate and desperate. Stella: Norma, for something sakes, he's my FRIEND! Norma doesnt hear anything, she just hugs him more tightly. Then Norma gives Jerry a kiss. Stella tries to say something between, but they wont stop. Stella: Norma, Norma....NOORRMAAA! I dont mind if you hold Jerry, or hug him awhile but DOOOON'T KIIIIISS HIIIM!! The audience laughs hysterically, claps their hands so much that neither Norma or Stella cant hear their own thoughts. Both Jerry and Dean crack up. Norma and Stella look each other with smile of victory and Norma takes her arms of around laughing Jerry. Then they look at the boys smiling innocently and say: Arent we dolls? Dean looks Jerry and says: We got bombed, pally. Jerry: No kidding?
Sorry if I was annoying you, I didnt mean to be annoying.
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