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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Feb 16, 2007 19:09:05 GMT -5
Welcome back, pally!  We're sooooo excited you're back!  What's the news? Any good stories?  |
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Feb 16, 2007 19:50:03 GMT -5
*takes bow* thank you, thank you for the welcome back!! lol OH LORD IVE MISSED YOU GUYS!!! sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much-o!! lol, aww, It's gonna take me a minute to get back in the groove again  but IT's goona happen!  and yeah, Im a loser so I dont have any good stories just that when I was gone I kept myself busy making picture comments for myspace, reading a novel on Marilyn Monroe, and Im writting a novel, I'll show you guys some of it if ya want?? huh? anytakers?? lol |
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Feb 17, 2007 12:02:07 GMT -5
aww, no one wants to see some of my novel! lolol, Man it's hard writting a book! lol, it's hard making everything in third person and stuff, lol, well it's not all that good anyways, lol, but I do have one part I'll post if you guys wanna see it, and Im for real, I HAVE been writting a novel, lol
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Post by Ajax on Feb 17, 2007 14:10:47 GMT -5
I'd love to see it...I would have posted earlier but I just got on here not too long ago and was checking out the board lol. I just go down the list of topics and check them off as I go along. POST IT! I WANNA READ IT!
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Feb 17, 2007 15:34:15 GMT -5
I'd like to read it, too, pally! Send it over!
Make a thread in the adventures, lol.
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Feb 18, 2007 20:55:13 GMT -5
lol, okay, lol, heres a little taste of my second chapter, LOL, ok so dont make fun! lol, this is my first book! HAHA! ok here goes nothin' (literaly! lol)
" Clara looks into his eyes, reading them, and she can tell he is telling the sincere truth and that it pains him that it is the truth. Louis is also looking deep into her eyes too, reading for a sense of approval, that she knows he's telling the truth. In the moon light his dark brown eyes glisten, and her deep green eyes dazzle, they stand there staring intently into each others eyes, in the silence of the night, the cold bitting there cheeks, turning them slightly pink. The the wind is blowing Clara's hair, perfectly framing her face and the light has cast a slight shadow over Louis's face, just highlighting his glistening eyes. Beyond the cold, they can feel the heat of each other, Then quickly, but gently Louis grabs Clara, and hold her closely, never loosing sight of her eyes, then he leans in and before they know it, they kiss. He kisses her hard at first, then soft, and gentle. All the feelings inside Clara have erupted as she runs her hand through Louis' hair, kissing him just as much as he is her. Louis runs his hand up her back, Clara gets chills, his touch was like no others, and she liked it. All of a sudden Clara quickly pulls away from Louis. “We shouldn't have done that” Clara says as she turns away from Louis. “Why? Whats the matter” Louis asks as he walks over to Clara. “Your married!, I can't do this--”, Louis interrupts her, “I told you--” “Yes and I believe you Louis, it's just...I cant” Clara says as she shakes her head, walking away."
you like?? ;D
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Feb 19, 2007 11:41:21 GMT -5
Wow, that's great, Sel!! And geez, you have a whole novel finished or you're getting there? Megg should help you make it into a book! lol, She's really good at it |
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Post by Ajax on Feb 19, 2007 13:57:00 GMT -5
Wow, I love the detail! Very nice! Haha, well, the most I can do is print it out and put it in a binder...I wish I had one of those little Spiral bound book maker things, but we'll just have to settle for the ghetto versions lol  By the way, I've figured that at the rate we're going we are going to end up with 114 pages, but that's not really bad...I'm still deciding if I want to make the pages front and back or just one side...I'll see how it comes out I'm on chapter 20! |
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Feb 19, 2007 14:38:10 GMT -5
Wow! Chapter 20 and what page on the forum?
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Post by Ajax on Feb 19, 2007 16:49:10 GMT -5
Page 20...I've decided to make each page of the forum its own chapter because when we are telling both of the stories, there aren't really any *scary music* points in the story, because if we did it that way, just about every single post would be its own chapter...but I'll send the "draft" to you before I print it all out and you can tell me what you think of it, if you don't like it, I can make the chapters different...
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Feb 19, 2007 19:09:07 GMT -5
lol, aww the ghetto version! HA!! i love it, but yeah no, Im not finished w/ it, when I have nothing to do I usualy go at it a little over a page at a time but Im so happy you guys like it! lol, and men! a book is sooooooo hard to make! lol, Im so use to writting " sel: hey Kim: yo! " not in thrid person! lol, then I have to always go back and read it like 3 times and add detail here and there! If I ever finish, I think I'lll throw a party! lol, on MSN! YAY!!....and sliiide! |
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Post by *~Mrs. Cooper ~* on Feb 19, 2007 20:37:24 GMT -5
LOL
I've never said, "yo" in my life...it would sound weird if I said it. People would expect me to say, "...and that's what I play to pass the time"
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Post by Ajax on Feb 19, 2007 20:42:43 GMT -5
YAY! And then, when I'm a well known announcer at the age of 40 and own my own publishing house, I will publish it for you, yeah, so you gotta wait 19 years...but ya know...
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Feb 25, 2007 18:31:45 GMT -5
lol, okay, so it should be done like 2-3 years after you open your publishing house! LOL |
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Post by Ajax on Mar 5, 2007 21:35:26 GMT -5
LOL no problem pally, I'll never forget ya! And, Since you're such a pally, I'LL DO IT FOR FREE! Yeah, so you will probably be my only customer ever lol before I have to close up shop, but ya know...at least you'll have a book out lol...and then I put out the 30's |
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Mar 14, 2007 14:52:33 GMT -5
LOL, sounds great!
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Post by Ajax on Mar 28, 2007 15:03:49 GMT -5
Sounds like a plan! *Shakes on it*
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Post by Mrs. Lewis on Mar 28, 2007 20:26:56 GMT -5
*spits in hand* it's more of a contract this way ;D
LOL, this just reminded me, I totaly neglected my novel! *clicks on icon* BACK TO WORK SEL!!! lol
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