Feedback for the 30's...

[*~Mrs. Cooper ~*]

As everyone knows, Megg and I are planning to publish the 30's annd make it into a novel.
Now, in my writing class, my teacher's really interested in this project and she told me to get my feedback from the audience.

That's where you (the readers) come in.

5 questions from the audience:

* What do you like about it?
* What do you not like about it?
* What are it's good points?
* What are it's bad points?
* Is it believable; or if it's a fantasy, is it written well enough to envision in the mind's eye?

ANY feedback is greatly appreciated.

I'll need more feedback that just one person, lol. So any passer-byers are welcome as well; you don't have to read the entire story, just a page is fine.

Thanks so much in advance.

[Ajax]

I'll get this ball rolling lol, let's hope you get more feedback soon, eh?!

* What do you like about it? My posts...no, just kidding I like that we are both audience and author. I also like that we can take the story anywhere we want. It would be boring if we just played the characters they way everyone knows they are played. We'd just be writing down the history of Martin and Lewis and throwing ourselves in on the side

* What do you not like about it? Your posts No, I LOVE YOUR POSTS! I don't really have a dislike, but that could be because I am one of the authors Besides, it's related to Martin and Lewis, and how could that be bad?!

* What are it's good points? The fact that we can do whatever we want, and don't have to play the characters straight, as I said above. I love that we can torture Deeds, have Dean knocking Jerry out, having me not know which man I want, and have no real repercussions of Kissing jerry, since I know Dean will come right back. I also like that we can add twists and turns that the other might not even be expecting.

* What are it's bad points? Martin and Lewis and Bad don't go in the same sentence. Okay, so they did there, but NEVER AGAIN!

* Is it believable; or if it's a fantasy, is it written well enough to envision in the mind's eye? I think most of it is believable, except for the torturing Deeds. I think that it could probably happen in real life, but it would be one of those once in a million years sort of deals! I think it's all very believable, I can envision all the settings while I'm writing, it's too bad I can't draw, because you should see what I'm seeing. Of course, we're probably seeing the same thing because we're usually on the same page anyways lol.

[*~Mrs. Cooper ~*]

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[Ajax]

I love the one with the text LOL I'm retarded, sorry! Aww, I love the new fonts pally! Absolutely adorable!

[*~Mrs. Cooper ~*]

Dedication:

[Ajax]

OH MY GOD PALLY! OH MY GOD! *Sobs*