Post by Mrs. Lewis on Jan 26, 2007 8:19:17 GMT -5
lol, okay, we need some drama! lol, b/c we like never post in this thing! lol, I want ours to be good so we can show off! lol, okay heres goes nothin'!!
*jer makes a run for it twards the door! but the men see him and shoot!!*
jer: *stops in mid air* Im done!
man: now sit down! *pulls him down from his "matrix" pose, lol*
man: wheres your friends?!
jer: what friends?
man: the people you were with!
jer: what friends? what people? I dont know no people!
man: a wise guy ehh??
jer: no, ehhh!!
man:*punches jerry* Shut your mouth! now wheres your friends?!
jer: I--
*man slaps him again*
man: I said shut your mouth! now wheres your friends?!
jer: I sai--
man: *slaps him again* I said SHUT YOUR MOUTH! now where are your friends?!?
jer: *silent*
man: Not gonna talk, ehh??
jer: *rolls his eyes* Not again!
*man slaps Jer again! lol*
*meanwhile....*
*Dean and the girls made it oput the door without getting cought!*
sel:*out of breath* Meg!
meg:*out of breath* wh--what?
sel: wheres Jerry??
Dean: Oh no!
sel: we left him?!
Dean: left who??
sel: well what were you just talking about??
DEan: I lost my watch! I gotta go back for it!
meg: your talking about your watch?!
sel: when your partner is stuck inside?!
dean:*looks at the girls' worried faces...* *ahem, puts arm on his forhead* I mean, OH NO! Jer is in side!!
sel: umm yeah!
meg: so what are we going to do?? they might kill him!!
dean: I got it! follow me!
meg: where are we going??
sel: who knows! but we get to watch Dean Martin run!
*both girls stop running and stop to enjoy the view!*
dean: C'mon!
*girls jump out of daze*
both: oh yeah!
*the girls follow dean behind the building, then up a ladder, now the girls are on top of the building!*
sel: what are we doing up here?!
meg: yeah! and it sure is windy!
*sel nods in agreement*
dean: look, heres the plan, you see that sky window right there? *points to window on the ground, on top of the building*
both: *holding on to each other for wormth* yeah?
dean:*looks around and finds some rope, then begins to tie it around his waist* well Im gonna go down, and I need you two to hold me up
sel: *looks at her hands* but my arms arent long enough to hold you from up here!!
meg:*nudges sel* he means with the rope stupid!
sel: OOOOOOOHH! ;D
dean:*laughs* yes with the rope, and when I tug it two times, that means pull me up!
sel: so what are you gonna do when you down there??
dean: well, I suppose they wont see me, and no one will say anything because there all laying on the ground, face down, so I'll hand over them and wack 'em!
meg: with what??
sel: I see something!
*runs to a near corner on top of the building, bends over to pick something up, but the wind blows up her skirt!*
meg: SEL!
sel: hold on just a minute!
*meg looks to Dean, who is smirking, but none the less looking*
meg: sel!
sel: boy, sure is cold up here!, what do you want?!
meg: your skirt!!
sel: what?? *turns and see's her skirts is way up on the air!* *gaps* MEG! why didnt you tell me!?!
meg:*rolls her eyes* just bring what ever it is you got..
sel: well I fount this bat under all that junk over there!
Dean: perfect!..... and how convienient everything we need is on this roof *rim shock please! *
dean: anyways, okay you two hold on tight! *hand them the rope* and remember, two tugs!
both:*nod*
*dean carefully lifts open the window, and slowly lowers himself in the building, both girls wait quietly, suspence killing them!*
*dean lowers himself, little by little, no one has seen him yet, and he see's jer laying, pastout in a chair, while the men are standing counting there money while everyone is laying on the ground with there hands on there heads..Dean gets closer, now he's right above them, but one of the men, the leader, walks away..*
man: I'll be right back, Im gonna go see if I can find those 3 who got away..
other man: okay boss...*goes back to counting the money..*
*dean "hovers" quietly over the men, while the boss goes outside, Dean raises the bat, gets a good aim, and--
jer: *opens his eyes and see's dean* *jer begins to open his mouth, Dean see's him! and shakes his head! mouths the words "shut up!"
Jer: DEAN! I knew you'd come back!!
men: what?! *look up*
dean: aaaaahhhh! *swings!*
jer:....boy dean! you got 'em both with just one hit!
dean:*opens his eyes* I did? *ahem* I mean, I DID!
*everyone gets up and claps*
dean: okay, well I should go back up*raises his hand to tug on the rope, when all of a sudden, he falls to the ground!! lol*
dean: what the?! they let me go!! why I oughta--
jer: Look Dean!*jerry runs to the end of the rope on the ground* It's a note!
dean: I know that! *snatches it from jer*
jer: whats it say??
dean : they got the girls!
jer: Oh no Dean! we gotta do somethin!
dean: get some new girls?
Jer:*swats dean* NO! we gotta save them!
*dum, dum, duuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmm! lol I LOVE clifthangers!! lol, well have fun with this! and dont worry! you can do what ever you want!!! hope you loved it! *
*jer makes a run for it twards the door! but the men see him and shoot!!*
jer: *stops in mid air* Im done!
man: now sit down! *pulls him down from his "matrix" pose, lol*
man: wheres your friends?!
jer: what friends?
man: the people you were with!
jer: what friends? what people? I dont know no people!
man: a wise guy ehh??
jer: no, ehhh!!
man:*punches jerry* Shut your mouth! now wheres your friends?!
jer: I--
*man slaps him again*
man: I said shut your mouth! now wheres your friends?!
jer: I sai--
man: *slaps him again* I said SHUT YOUR MOUTH! now where are your friends?!?
jer: *silent*
man: Not gonna talk, ehh??
jer: *rolls his eyes* Not again!
*man slaps Jer again! lol*
*meanwhile....*
*Dean and the girls made it oput the door without getting cought!*
sel:*out of breath* Meg!
meg:*out of breath* wh--what?
sel: wheres Jerry??
Dean: Oh no!
sel: we left him?!
Dean: left who??
sel: well what were you just talking about??
DEan: I lost my watch! I gotta go back for it!
meg: your talking about your watch?!
sel: when your partner is stuck inside?!
dean:*looks at the girls' worried faces...* *ahem, puts arm on his forhead* I mean, OH NO! Jer is in side!!
sel: umm yeah!
meg: so what are we going to do?? they might kill him!!
dean: I got it! follow me!
meg: where are we going??
sel: who knows! but we get to watch Dean Martin run!
*both girls stop running and stop to enjoy the view!*
dean: C'mon!
*girls jump out of daze*
both: oh yeah!
*the girls follow dean behind the building, then up a ladder, now the girls are on top of the building!*
sel: what are we doing up here?!
meg: yeah! and it sure is windy!
*sel nods in agreement*
dean: look, heres the plan, you see that sky window right there? *points to window on the ground, on top of the building*
both: *holding on to each other for wormth* yeah?
dean:*looks around and finds some rope, then begins to tie it around his waist* well Im gonna go down, and I need you two to hold me up
sel: *looks at her hands* but my arms arent long enough to hold you from up here!!
meg:*nudges sel* he means with the rope stupid!
sel: OOOOOOOHH! ;D
dean:*laughs* yes with the rope, and when I tug it two times, that means pull me up!
sel: so what are you gonna do when you down there??
dean: well, I suppose they wont see me, and no one will say anything because there all laying on the ground, face down, so I'll hand over them and wack 'em!
meg: with what??
sel: I see something!
*runs to a near corner on top of the building, bends over to pick something up, but the wind blows up her skirt!*
meg: SEL!
sel: hold on just a minute!
*meg looks to Dean, who is smirking, but none the less looking*
meg: sel!
sel: boy, sure is cold up here!, what do you want?!
meg: your skirt!!
sel: what?? *turns and see's her skirts is way up on the air!* *gaps* MEG! why didnt you tell me!?!
meg:*rolls her eyes* just bring what ever it is you got..
sel: well I fount this bat under all that junk over there!
Dean: perfect!..... and how convienient everything we need is on this roof *rim shock please! *
dean: anyways, okay you two hold on tight! *hand them the rope* and remember, two tugs!
both:*nod*
*dean carefully lifts open the window, and slowly lowers himself in the building, both girls wait quietly, suspence killing them!*
*dean lowers himself, little by little, no one has seen him yet, and he see's jer laying, pastout in a chair, while the men are standing counting there money while everyone is laying on the ground with there hands on there heads..Dean gets closer, now he's right above them, but one of the men, the leader, walks away..*
man: I'll be right back, Im gonna go see if I can find those 3 who got away..
other man: okay boss...*goes back to counting the money..*
*dean "hovers" quietly over the men, while the boss goes outside, Dean raises the bat, gets a good aim, and--
jer: *opens his eyes and see's dean* *jer begins to open his mouth, Dean see's him! and shakes his head! mouths the words "shut up!"
Jer: DEAN! I knew you'd come back!!
men: what?! *look up*
dean: aaaaahhhh! *swings!*
jer:....boy dean! you got 'em both with just one hit!
dean:*opens his eyes* I did? *ahem* I mean, I DID!
*everyone gets up and claps*
dean: okay, well I should go back up*raises his hand to tug on the rope, when all of a sudden, he falls to the ground!! lol*
dean: what the?! they let me go!! why I oughta--
jer: Look Dean!*jerry runs to the end of the rope on the ground* It's a note!
dean: I know that! *snatches it from jer*
jer: whats it say??
dean : they got the girls!
jer: Oh no Dean! we gotta do somethin!
dean: get some new girls?
Jer:*swats dean* NO! we gotta save them!
*dum, dum, duuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmm! lol I LOVE clifthangers!! lol, well have fun with this! and dont worry! you can do what ever you want!!! hope you loved it! *